Comments on: Beliefs and Practices in Women Health http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health All about women health information Sun, 31 Jan 2010 08:33:51 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: smart-doctor-egypt http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-18 smart-doctor-egypt Wed, 12 Aug 2009 19:55:29 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-18 so what exactly was the question you wanted answered or are ya just written a book? so confusing so what exactly was the question you wanted answered or are ya just written a book? so confusing

]]> By: Unka Dano http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-17 Unka Dano Wed, 12 Aug 2009 16:49:57 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-17 Sure, I'll sign it!! I'll even go one step further, and---on #9---will be happy to support Conservatives/Republican gun ownership as it pertains to handguns, as well as hunting rifles. As long as they are not felons or violent offenders, I have no problem with them owning a registered gun. Sure, I'll sign it!! I'll even go one step further, and—on #9—will be happy to support Conservatives/Republican gun ownership as it pertains to handguns, as well as hunting rifles. As long as they are not felons or violent offenders, I have no problem with them owning a registered gun.

]]> By: dmldldml http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-15 dmldldml Wed, 12 Aug 2009 13:37:59 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-15 look in your book look in your book

]]> By: quitalcohol http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-8 quitalcohol Tue, 11 Aug 2009 21:20:31 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-8 Int. Natural Health club is organising Int. Campaign to make people familiar about the Natural Herbs, which controls the Alcohol Addiction in just 5 days. This is very important natural Gift to the Human. People who suffer or the loved ones of the suffers should contact us. Int. Natural Health club is organising Int. Campaign to make people familiar about the Natural Herbs, which controls the Alcohol Addiction in just 5 days. This is very important natural Gift to the Human. People who suffer or the loved ones of the suffers should contact us.

]]> By: flamingwithfire http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-9 flamingwithfire Tue, 11 Aug 2009 16:32:20 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-9 Great news, there is indeed hope for everyone. Great news, there is indeed hope for everyone.

]]> By: Gorillazfreak18 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-6 Gorillazfreak18 Tue, 11 Aug 2009 11:52:14 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-6 People are drinking less and smoking more pot for some reason. People are drinking less and smoking more pot for some reason.

]]> By: jhof989620 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-5 jhof989620 Tue, 11 Aug 2009 06:45:50 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-5 This was a really good video......very positive and not preachy...good span of age groups. Thank you. This was a really good video……very positive and not preachy…good span of age groups. Thank you.

]]> By: smart-doctor-egypt http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-14 smart-doctor-egypt Mon, 10 Aug 2009 23:26:27 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-14 Good luck with that. Good luck with that.

]]> By: Minerva http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-13 Minerva Mon, 10 Aug 2009 13:52:59 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-13 It is nice to find kids that actually do their homework and not just post it here for other people to answer. Here are my suggestions and corrections for some simple mistakes that I found. Overall your essay is very well written. Good luck and I hope my suggestions help ;-) 1) 1st paragraph: The article attemps to provide an explanation FOR (instead of "of") 2) The article emphasized the social, cultural and legal aspects of the society and provides relevant information on how these three characteristics can make a different in the sexual health of the public. Use EMPHASIZES to continue in the present tense 3) Same sentence above: Use difference instead of different. 4) The influence of western societies has an impact on new immigrants in European countries, and their behaviors and beliefs have to be adjusted or changed in order to fit in. Here eliminate changed, since it sounds redundant. You want to demonstrate that you know what you're talking about, don't define a word unless it is a complicated one. 5) The Islamic population is one of the most affected by the influence of modernization and the lacking of information or the denial of having a real problem. Here is how I would edit this sentence: The Islamic population is one of the most affected by modernization, lack of information, and denial when it comes to facing problems. 6) The problems and dilemmas that the Islamic community faces change depending on the situation; sexual violence, homosexuality, abstinence, HIV/STD’s, virginity and anything related to sexual behaviors are topics that are not appropriated to be discuss in public.* Again here "problems and dilemmas" is unnecessary, as the words are synonyms. Also change "appropriated" to appropriate, and change "discuss" to discussed. 7) Communication is sometimes a barrier that makes difficult the appropriate health care delivery, not only because of the different languages spoke ( here add spoken). 8) I personally found this article interesting because it presents a different point of view about sexual health, the article emphasized on the social and cultural factors as determinants or at least influential on the diseases that the immigrant Islamic population face in European countries. Here add a period after health. Also use emphasizes and faces. 9) The comparison was kind of weak between Caribbean and Islamic populations. Maybe use somewaht instead of kind? It is nice to find kids that actually do their homework and not just post it here for other people to answer. Here are my suggestions and corrections for some simple mistakes that I found. Overall your essay is very well written. Good luck and I hope my suggestions help ;-)

1) 1st paragraph: The article attemps to provide an explanation FOR (instead of "of")

2) The article emphasized the social, cultural and legal aspects of the society and provides relevant information on how these three characteristics can make a different in the sexual health of the public. Use EMPHASIZES to continue in the present tense

3) Same sentence above: Use difference instead of different.

4) The influence of western societies has an impact on new immigrants in European countries, and their behaviors and beliefs have to be adjusted or changed in order to fit in. Here eliminate changed, since it sounds redundant. You want to demonstrate that you know what you're talking about, don't define a word unless it is a complicated one.

5) The Islamic population is one of the most affected by the influence of modernization and the lacking of information or the denial of having a real problem. Here is how I would edit this sentence: The Islamic population is one of the most affected by modernization, lack of information, and denial when it comes to facing problems.

6) The problems and dilemmas that the Islamic community faces change depending on the situation; sexual violence, homosexuality, abstinence, HIV/STD’s, virginity and anything related to sexual behaviors are topics that are not appropriated to be discuss in public.* Again here "problems and dilemmas" is unnecessary, as the words are synonyms. Also change "appropriated" to appropriate, and change "discuss" to discussed.

7) Communication is sometimes a barrier that makes difficult the appropriate health care delivery, not only because of the different languages spoke ( here add spoken).

8) I personally found this article interesting because it presents a different point of view about sexual health, the article emphasized on the social and cultural factors as determinants or at least influential on the diseases that the immigrant Islamic population face in European countries. Here add a period after health. Also use emphasizes and faces.

9) The comparison was kind of weak between Caribbean and Islamic populations. Maybe use somewaht instead of kind?

]]> By: neworldorder65 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health/comment-page-1#comment-7 neworldorder65 Mon, 10 Aug 2009 09:00:35 +0000 http://www.ybenedict.org/beliefs-and-practices-in-women-health#comment-7 truth is there's no such thing as alcoholism/addiction. so-called alcoholic drinking/using is just one expression of a compulsive personality. the key to lasting and satisfying recovery, therefore, isn't simply to stop drinking and using but, rather, to move beyond the entire compulsive lifestye. takes more work than your typical recovery program but well worth it in the end. anything short of this will leave you struggling with depression and anxiety, as well as relapse. truth is there’s no such thing as alcoholism/addiction. so-called alcoholic drinking/using is just one expression of a compulsive personality. the key to lasting and satisfying recovery, therefore, isn’t simply to stop drinking and using but, rather, to move beyond the entire compulsive lifestye. takes more work than your typical recovery program but well worth it in the end. anything short of this will leave you struggling with depression and anxiety, as well as relapse.

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